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Sue Lynn Tan

Immortal

Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2025

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Part 1, Chapters 1-8Chapter Summaries & Analyses

Part 1, Chapter 1 Summary

Content Warning: This section of the guide includes discussion of death.

Liyen’s home is set on fire by the God of War, Lord Zhangwei, who came with Queen Caihong to retrieve the Divine Pearl Lotus flower from her grandfather, the Lord of Tianxia, who refuses them access. Tianxia is a trusted and loyal subject of the Queen of the Golden Desert. Long ago, the kingdom pledged to serve the immortals who used their magic to build a wall around it, protecting Tianxia from the Wuxin enemy.

Liyen has a weak constitution, though physicians cannot pinpoint her condition. She does not have much support as the heir of Tianxia. Many have advised her grandfather to adopt another, stronger heir, while some have attempted to kill her. Just weeks ago, someone poisoned her with waters of death from the Wangchuan River in the Netherworld, for which there is no cure. Her grandfather searched for an antidote, the lotus. The flower disintegrates when she accepts it, flowing into her chest.

Liyen’s grandfather rushes Liyen out of the palace with her Aunt Shou and Aunt Shou’s adopted son, Chengyin. Aunt Shou promises to hide Liyen until the Divine Pearl Lotus merges with her body and becomes concealed. Then Liyen can return safely home. Liyen’s grandfather also reveals that the lotus cannot be seized, “only gifted through a willing heart” (9). Meanwhile, he plans to confess to Lord Zhangwei and Queen Caihong and bear the punishment alone.

Instead of fleeing right away, the trio takes a path near the Eastern Gate, where they overhear Liyen’s grandfather greeting Queen Caihong and Lord Zhangwei. He confesses that someone stole the lotus, but before he can say who, he has a heart attack and dies.

Part 1, Chapter 2 Summary

After fleeing the palace grounds, Aunt Shou and Chengyin attempt to comfort Liyen in her grief over her grandfather’s passing. Aunt Shou claims that the pain will not go away but gets easier. Aunt Shou relates her own experience grieving her lost daughter, Damei. Though Liyen wants to blame the immortals for her grandfather’s death, she knows his heart was weak and his death was natural. Despite this, she still wishes to release Tianxia from its service to the immortals and bring down the walls that keep her people contained.

Liyen and Aunt Shou discuss the selfishness of the immortals, who show “little compassion or mercy when [mortals] falter” (19-20). Liyen claims that devotion like the immortals expect should be earned instead of demanded. Creatures called Winged Devils attack Liyen and Aunt Shou, attempting to take Liyen. The attack damages a nearby shrine to the God of War, summoning him to the area.

Part 1, Chapter 3 Summary

Lord Zhangwei traps the Winged Devils in fiery cages. He questions Liyen about her identity, learning she is the Lady of Tianxia. Liyen claims she fled when her home was attacked and only later learned of her grandfather’s death. Zhangwei questions the Winged Devils, asking if they do the bidding of the Wuxin. The Winged Devils answer vaguely that the Wuxin are still sealed in the Netherworld. Zhangwei kills all but one Winged Devil, offering to spare the life of the final one if he answers Zhangwei’s questions; the Winged Devil instead chooses to die by suicide. Afterward, Liyen implies that Zhangwei takes pride in bringing about suffering and death as the God of War. He perplexes her by claiming he does not feel glory or triumph in it, accusing her of judging him due to her own ignorance. Zhangwei asks what the Winged Devils wanted with Liyen, but she does not know.

Zhangwei informs Liyen she must return with him and share her loyalty to Queen Caihong, as every ruler of Tianxia has done before her. If she does not, she will not have her mandate to rule. Liyen requests one month to grieve her grandfather and set her affairs in order. Zhangwei grants this request, claiming an escort will bring her to the Immortal Realm in four weeks. Zhangwei gifts Liyen a sword like his own to protect herself against creatures like the Winged Devil, who do not fall to mortal blades.

Part 1, Chapter 4 Summary

Liyen passes weeks grieving. She also begins attending to matters at court. Minister Guo, one of her most ambitious courtiers, pushes for her urgent betrothal. Because of her poor health, he believes it is in her best interest to sire an heir in case she dies young. However, the men he suggests as potential suitors are all connected to him in some way, revealing his eagerness to seize power. Liyen swiftly dismisses the topic.

After a long day at court, Liyen returns to her study, where she flips through a book of her grandfather’s written by Lady Zhirong, one of the earliest rulers of Tianxia. The book describes how the Wuxin came to their kingdom. The Wuxin are humanoid beings who feed on emotions instead of food. When Queen Caihong ascended the throne of the Golden Desert in the Immortal Realm, the Wuxin refused to accept her rule, and war broke out. The Wuxin descended to Tianxia, where they fed on the people’s sorrow, inflicting loss and devastation on the kingdom.

The Wuxin signed a treaty with Queen Caihong, who claimed Tianxia’s service in exchange for protecting them during the war with the Wuxin. Tianxia surrendered a treasure, the Shield of Rivers and Mountains, to the immortals, allowing Queen Caihiong to erect an enchanted wall around Tianxia to prevent the Wuxin from invading the rest of their realm. Once the threat was fully vanquished, Queen Caihong would return the Shield of Rivers and Mountains and bring the walls down. This has not yet come to pass. The Wuxin managed to kill the queen’s consort but were eventually defeated and banished to the Wangchuan River, in the Netherworld.

Later, Liyen relates to Aunt Shou and Chengyin her desire to release Tianxia from their service to the immortals, bring down the wall, and retrieve the Shield of Rivers and Mountains. They caution her to remain vigilant.

Part 1, Chapter 5 Summary

The day Liyen is to be escorted to the Immortal Realm, a crowd of her people greets her. They appear to be starving, and she scolds her advisers for not relaying this information to her. She orders Minister Hu to open the reserves and send rice and other supplies to the people. Liyen leaves Chengyin to serve as First Adviser during her absence. She is surprised when Lord Zhangwei himself arrives on a cloud to escort her to the Immortal Realm. Instead of bringing her to Queen Caihong’s palace, into which intruders recently attempted to break, Zhangwei brings Liyen to his home.

Part 1, Chapter 6 Summary

Liyen expresses distaste for Zhangwei’s home. Though it is lovely, the opulence only reminds her of the starving mortals in Tianxia, who could make better use of that wealth. Zhangwei expresses interest in impressing her, suggesting that he should visit her home someday. Liyen invites him to visit when he wishes.

Zhangwei has his attendants prepare rooms for Liyen in the West Courtyard. Before going to his own chambers in the East Courtyard, Zhangwei informs Liyen that the South Courtyard is forbidden, but she may roam anywhere else she desires. In her chambers, Liyen forces herself to forget the kindness and consideration the God of War has shown her thus far. Instead, she observes the sword Zhangwei gifted her, planning to use it against him because “only an immortal weapon could hurt a god” (63).

Part 1, Chapter 7 Summary

The next morning, Liyen visits the South Courtyard out of curiosity. Though she finds it unguarded, the entrance is locked. Afterward, she visits the library. She is flipping through various books when Zhangwei finds her and inquires into how she is adjusting. Liyen asks him if he stores weaponry on the grounds, curious to learn more about immortal weapons that her soldiers might use in the future. She is surprised to learn that Zhangwei stores no weapons on his premises. Liyen makes a convincing argument to Zhangwei, insisting that if the immortals expect her people to fight for them, they should provide them with weaponry that can cut down even immortal enemies like the Wuxin or the Winged Devils. Not doing so only places her soldiers in unnecessary danger.

When Liyen notices a cut on Zhangwei’s face, earned during sparring with a fellow warrior, she seizes the opportunity to gain his affections by tending to the wound. Afterward, she invites him to play a game of weiqi with her. While playing, they compare mortals to immortals. Though immortals have the advantage of time, magic, and health, Liyen does not believe those gifts make them superior to mortals. Mortals’ hearts and minds, she argues, are just as strong. When Zhangwei asks if she would ever choose to be immortal, Liyen responds that she would only if she had someone to share it with; otherwise “eternity might be lonely” (73).

The mention of loneliness reminds her of her grandfather’s death, and she becomes emotional. Zhangwei’s offered comfort leaves her both unnerved and grateful. The moment is ruined when Zhangwei changes the topic to the Divine Pearl Lotus. He asks if her grandfather mentioned it to her. Liyen wonders if his affections were meant to make her vulnerable and get her to share her secrets with him. She feigns ignorance about the lotus. Liyen pretends to be less skilled than she is at weiqi and lets him win, much to his disappointment. Zhangwei reveals he will be away the next morning but invites Liyen to have dinner with him. Still seeking a connection she can use to aid her people, Liyen accepts.

Part 1, Chapter 8 Summary

The next morning, after Lord Zhangwei departs for the day, Liyen is eager to explore the estate. Her attendants seem equally eager to prepare her for dinner with Lord Zhangwei that night, but Liyen is annoyed that they think she wishes for anything romantic with the God of War. Though Liyen is curious to explore the forbidden South Courtyard, she instead opts for the East Courtyard, where Lord Zhangwei’s private quarters are. In the East Courtyard, Liyen overhears someone playing the qin. Drawn in by the melody of yearning and loss, she is surprised to discover Lord Zhangwei is the one playing. When he notices her, he accuses her of trespassing. He admits to sometimes lying about leaving the estate, preferring to rest without anyone knowing he is around. Liyen notes the key to the South Courtyard at his waist and orchestrates a clumsy trip that knocks them both to the ground, allowing her to steal the key without him noticing.

Part 1, Chapters 1-8 Analysis

Similar to the themes surrounding the sacrifices (or betrayals) parents commit in Daughter of the Moon Goddess, Immortal explores how far a parent would go to save their child. Just as Chang’e drinks the elixir to save her child in Daughter of the Moon Goddess, in Immortal Liyen’s grandfather steals the Divine Pearl Lotus meant for Queen Caihong and uses it to save Liyen’s life. When Aunt Shou asks about his motives, he says that he is always thinking of Liyen. “It’s why I did this—to give her a chance” (9), he says. This scene illustrates the “status quo” of Liyen’s life before her grandfather’s death and introduces the mortals who surround and unconditionally love her. This explains her dislike for immortals, whom she regards as selfish, apathetic, and unmerciful compared to her own family and friends’ selflessness, empathy, and compassion.

These early scenes depicting Liyen’s loved ones introduce all of the novel’s major themes. Liyen’s grandfather’s death and her conflicting feelings about the immortals’ role in her misfortune build the theme of The Cyclical Nature of Vengeance. Though she is tempted to seek vengeance against the immortals for the consequences of their carelessness on the Mortal Realm, she consistently reminds herself that vengeance only leads to the continuation of hatred and violence. Her focus on reason over violence is illustrated in her first interaction with the God of War. After he ruthlessly kills the Winged Devils who attacked her, Liyen expresses disgust over his reputation, believing he “thrive[s] on power, fear, and glory” (28). However, his offense at the claim suggests she has him wrong: “I’m not asking for gratitude […] Just don’t misplace your hate” (29). This exchange suggests that despite knowing better, in her grief, Liyen feels an irrational desire to seek vengeance against the immortals, which leads her to make accusations and judgments without enough evidence. Throughout much of the novel, Liyen will struggle with this conflict between her desire to see evil punished and her desire to minimize conflict.

Meanwhile, Liyen’s interactions with Aunt Shou invoke the theme of Greed and the Pursuit of Power. In the opening chapters, Aunt Shou is the one “mortal” character who openly criticizes the immortals alongside Liyen. When Liyen reveals her plans to release Tianxia from its service to the immortals, Aunt Shou’s reply suggests that the immortals’ greed leads to limitless cruelty, “Never forget what the immortals are capable of, the cruelty in their indifference. [...] If you rely on their mercy, you will find none” (44). Aunt Shou often emphasizes the immortals’ power and their belief in mortal inferiority, shaping Liyen’s beliefs about them. These negative perceptions about the immortals lead her to despise the opulence of the God of War’s estate. She initially believes him to be just as greedy as the other immortals, languishing in wealth while they inflict destruction and suffering on mortals with their absentminded whims. However, the novel challenges Liyen’s initial set of beliefs, ultimately finding Aunt Shou to be as greedy for power as she claimed the immortals were.

Liyen shoulders the burden of becoming ruler over Tianxia, and her goal of Earning Rather than Demanding Devotion from her people is another of the novel’s themes. Liyen values her grandfather’s morals and way of ruling, referring to her duty to her people as “guard[ing] their welfare and happiness, to keep them safe” (37). Liyen struggles to settle into ruling, feeling like an undeserving impostor on the throne. Many times, whether verbally or internally, Liyen expresses the belief that she does not deserve the throne or the support of her people because she inherited, rather than earned, her position. Though Liyen’s rule purportedly depends on a mandate from the queen, Liyen refuses the mandate when it is offered, instead choosing to earn the right to rule directly from the people. Much of the novel concerns itself with her quest to earn her position through service to her people. Her efforts to release Tianxia from its servitude to the immortal, retrieve its heirloom shield, and dismantle the protective barrier wall are her way of earning her right to rule.

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